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* "He had played 109 league games with the club, and scored 18 goals." - add a source |
* "He had played 109 league games with the club, and scored 18 goals." - add a source |
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::{{ok}} I added a source and did a slight correction on the goals' number in that section + on the infobox |
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* Remove the comma after "109 league games with the club". |
* Remove the comma after "109 league games with the club". |
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::{{ok}} done --[[User:Gunt50|Gunt50]] ([[User talk:Gunt50|talk]]) 20:05, 16 July 2021 (UTC) |
::{{ok}} done --[[User:Gunt50|Gunt50]] ([[User talk:Gunt50|talk]]) 20:05, 16 July 2021 (UTC) |
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::{{ok}} done --[[User:Gunt50|Gunt50]] ([[User talk:Gunt50|talk]]) 20:05, 16 July 2021 (UTC) |
::{{ok}} done --[[User:Gunt50|Gunt50]] ([[User talk:Gunt50|talk]]) 20:05, 16 July 2021 (UTC) |
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* Archive sources (you can do it manually or use [https://iabot.toolforge.org/index.php?page=runbotsingle this automatic tool]). |
* Archive sources (you can do it manually or use [https://iabot.toolforge.org/index.php?page=runbotsingle this automatic tool]). |
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::{{working}} I'll get to that. I just need to learn how the thing works.--[[User:Gunt50|Gunt50]] ([[User talk:Gunt50|talk]]) 21:10, 16 July 2021 (UTC) |
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* Sort categories in alphabetical order. |
* Sort categories in alphabetical order. |
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::{{ok}} done --[[User:Gunt50|Gunt50]] ([[User talk:Gunt50|talk]]) 20:41, 16 July 2021 (UTC) |
::{{ok}} done --[[User:Gunt50|Gunt50]] ([[User talk:Gunt50|talk]]) 20:41, 16 July 2021 (UTC) |
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 04:19, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- "He had played 109 league games with the club, and scored 18 goals." - add a source
- I added a source and did a slight correction on the goals' number in that section + on the infobox
- Remove the comma after "109 league games with the club".
- done --Gunt50 (talk) 20:05, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Remove the comma after "River Plate in 2004".
- done --Gunt50 (talk) 20:05, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Add serial commas after "Lucas Alario, Carlos Sánchez" and "2015, 2016".
- done --Gunt50 (talk) 20:05, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- "his vision, technique, class, dribbling, and his ability" → "his vision, technique, class, dribbling, and ability"
- done --Gunt50 (talk) 20:05, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Archive sources (you can do it manually or use this automatic tool).
- Working I'll get to that. I just need to learn how the thing works.--Gunt50 (talk) 21:10, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Sort categories in alphabetical order.
- done --Gunt50 (talk) 20:41, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:20, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
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