User talk:Hatchens

Institute of Tropical Medicine, Nagasaki University

Institute of Tropical Medicine, Nagasaki University Added source, please move to main page — Preceding unsigned comment added by TOKYO2021 (talk • contribs)

Participate in the discussion

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:2021_Uttarakhand_flood#Page_name A discussion was already started before you created the similiar article. Please tell your opinion there. Regards

Draft:Vector Risk Management

Hi, you recently tagged my article for a speedy deletion, and I have understood why. I have changed the parts where you may think is disturbing, and I was hoping if you could check it out again. Thanks.

News1India Hindi News Channel

Hi,

I am trying to create a page for Draft:News1India, but it declined by you. This news channel in India. This is not any type of advrt. I am not understud that why this submission declined. I collect all information from Indian news channels. I am not connected to News1India. Can you help me to resolve all issus?

OFRA Cosmetics

Hi Hatchens! I saw your comment on my article denial, and I'm a little confused. I worked with a reviewer yesterday, and he helped me find super credible sources and said nothing about my tone. My goal here is to spread awareness about animal rights and cruelty-free beauty. I have another article draft I'm working on as well for an animal charity organization, Mardi Paws. Can you help me understand how I need to change my article and get it approved?

Draft:Rolf Engen

Good afternoon, Hatchens,

Thank you for taking a look at my Draft. I have made several changes over the last month or so in order to continue to formalize the tone and to make additional changes recommended by a previous reviewer (I have been working on this for a while now). I just made some additional changes as well just now. Are there any more areas that to your eye clearly need improvement? I'm having some trouble continuing to find ways to neutralize/flatten the tone (this is my first Wikipedia article, so please forgive my amateurism!). Thank you for your help - I'm looking forward to finishing this one up so I can start on my next one.

Good afternoon, Hatchens,

I went ahead and made numerous, additional changes to the draft. It is substantially more factually-driven and more neutral in tone now - thank you for your help.

Mohammed bin Rashid Centre for Leadership Development (MBRCLD)

Hi Hatchens,

I recently uploaded an article under for the Mohammaed Bin Rashid Centre for Leadership Development and I have noticed that it has gotten rejected within less than an hour. I have reviewed the article and I see nothing but facts in it, much like any other page about a learning centre or training institute. May I know why it was rejected and what I can do to improve it?

Draft: Arunabha Ghosh

Please let me know what needs to be changed. I have removed a lot of the language which sounded 'like an advertisement', but the submission was still rejected (for the third time). All of the statements made have citations and legitimate references. Not making any exaggerated claims or anything.

Draft:Manindra_Kumar_Roy

Hi Hatchens,

Thank you for taking time to look at my draft and leaving a comment on the page (Comment: VCs are generally considered notable. But, that doesn't mean puffery is allowed. Kindly redraft it, and submit it for a review.). According to the criteria for notable academics, I believe I article should qualify. I made a lot of edits and provided secondary sources that are independent of the subject in the article. It got declined few times and now I am not sure what is the reason. Are secondary sources in Bengali language are the issue or the writing style of the article? I would really appreciate any advise from you that would help. Thank you very much.--— Preceding unsigned comment added by Maximroy (talk • contribs) done by TTP1233 (talk · contribs).

Draft:Nima Bank

Hello Hatchens. I have recently made significant changes to this draft and have included new and reliable citations to further clarify the subject. Can I ask for a review of thee article? or for the rejection to be dropped? Can you make me understand the process? Thank you for your time. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rooz1370 (talk • contribs) 13:47, 18 October 2021 (UTC)

Hello, again Hatchens. I know you must be busy and I understand that, but I would love your great input on this matter so I could start working on the article again. Your input would mean the world to me thank you. Rooz1370 (talk) Rooz1370 (talk) 09:29, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

Hello Hatchens. I hope you're doing fine. Could you please consider helping me with the article that you rejected? I have made significant changes and I would love your feedback. Thank you. 08:45, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Request on 13:27:13, 19 October 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Anderson1970

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  • Draft:The Bengal Club (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hello, this is regarding the comments on my recent entry. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:The_Bengal_Club As I am new to Wikipedia and the editor's comments appeared to be rather broad, I am writing to request specific guidance in what needs change in what section. I would appreciate any assistance. Thank you.

Introductory paragraph:

- Does the editor wish each and every description of the subject institution by the press to be removed, or only some? Alternatively, should the descriptions simply be summarised in two or three words and the relevant press articles be footnoted? In other words, is the problem one of verbosity or verisimilitude? - Does the editor wish the quote by the well-known columnist and the well-known novelist, describing their respective perceptions of the subject institution, to be removed?

History: - Does the editor wish the names and backgrounds of important historical figures who headed the subject institution to be deleted? - In the section on 21st century history, does the editor wish all references to essays by prominent scholars and writers, describing their respective perceptions of the subject, to be removed? Or, should the perceptions be summarised in two or three words and the essays footnoted? - Does the editor wish the details of historical discrimination in the subject institution, and statements by famous historical figures on the same, to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the details of the architectural history of the subject institution to be deleted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos (which are stock images on Wikimedia) to be deleted?

Notable visitors: - Does the editor wish the name of any historical figure who visited the subject institution to be deleted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos of the historical figures (which are stock images on Wikimedia) to be deleted?

Notable speakers: - Does the editor wish the name of any important speaker to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the photos of two well-known personalities speaking at the subject institution to be deleted?

Notable events: - Does the editor wish the mention of any event held at the subject institution to be deleted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos to be deleted?

Facilities: - Does the editor wish the mention of any facility at the subject institution to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the quotes from the press to be deleted? Or, perhaps summarised and footnoted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the entire section to be deleted?

Cuisine: - Does the editor wish the entire section to be deleted, including the portions of potential historical significance? - Does the editor wish the favourable reviews by the press/scholars/experts to be deleted? Or, alternatively, summarised in a line or two and footnoted?

Art and artefacts: - Does the editor wish for any of the photos to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the entire section to be deleted?

Literary references: - Does the editor wish for any specific mention of a writer or book to be deleted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the entire section to be deleted?

Thank you.

Concern regarding Draft:Ridge Westfield Elementary School

Hello, Hatchens. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Ridge Westfield Elementary School, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 14:04, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

November 2021 backlog drive

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Forget Me Not Children's Hospice

Hello, Hatchens. This is a query regarding my draft article for Forget Me Not Children's Hospice - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Forget_Me_Not_Children%27s_Hospice. I have been recommended to seek help from you.

My article for Forget Me Not Children's Hospice has been declined twice now due to an issue with my citations/sources. I'm wondering why the article doesn't meet the minimum standard for inline citations (I have read the guidance and believe I have done everything properly). Most of all, I have been told my sources aren't reliable enough - despite me using sources from the BBC, Yorkshire Evening Post, Examiner Live, The Mirror, Charity commission, CQC - all of which are established, trusted news outlets and government bodies. I have looked at the Wikipedia page for Martin House Hospice, which is another local children's hospice, and I am confused how that page was approved and not mine? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Martin_House_Hospice - As you can see - Martin House's page uses only 4 sources, one of which is its own website? I have spent a long time finding good sources that prove Forget Me Not is worthy of a Wikipedia article. We are even mentioned on the Wikipedia article for HRH Princess Beatrice (who is the charity's royal patron) - which I would think is proof in itself that Forget Me Not are relevant enough to be approved?

I appreciate your help with this article. Please could you provide a more detailed explanation regarding the problems with my article and how I can fix them? (Where specifically have I used footnotes wrongly? How is my citing pattern incorrect? And which specific sources do you feel aren't reliable enough?) I am keen to get this article approved - so please give me as much specific feedback as you can!

Thank you for your help. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Adamsimpson1998 (talk • contribs) 10:48, 25 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Nikon Z 9

Added couple sources and article introduction. Other camera articles seem to link to non-primary sites for specifications, I've chosen to directly link Nikon's datasheet here since I think that'd be the actual authoritative source for these specs. Do you see something else missing? A picture would of course be nice but none are available yet under an appropriate license. -- Phiarc (talk) 17:15, 29 October 2021 (UTC)

Dear Phiarc, let me assess the draft and ping you back. Image would be an issue but do keep an eye at Wikimedia Commons. -Hatchens (talk) 07:32, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

RattanIndia articles

Hello Hatchens. Thank you for the pings on these two articles. At a quick glance, they both might not meet notability standards due to WP:RUNOFTHEMILL, but I might hold my peace until they get submitted for review. Regards, MrsSnoozyTurtle 07:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

MrsSnoozyTurtle: I'm ok with your call. If you need any sort of assistance, then just ping me. -Hatchens (talk) 07:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)