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Reviewer: Kpddg (talk · contribs) 05:39, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello. I will review this article. Please tell me if there are any problems. Thank You. Kpddg (talk) 05:39, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, Thanks for reviewing this article. Please do inform me of any shortcomings in the article which will be corrected. EpicSnek ^{Talk to me here} 06:31, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sure, I will start soon. Kpddg (talk) 09:54, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Basic Article Information

● Page Size: 135,708 bytes
● Page Created On: Ist October, 2001
● Number of Edits: 6,878
● Edits in Past 30 days: 26
● This article was previously a featured article. However, it was delisted a year ago and was not even considered as a good article. @EpicSnek , hope know the reasons for this a and that the article is better now.
Kpddg ^(talk) 10:42, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Section-wise Assessment

@ EpicSnek , there will be several corrections in the article. You can help with correcting them.

Lead Section

● The lead section is very well-written. There are no grammatical errors, sentence constrction errors, typos, etc.
● There is info like 'Karnataka is the sixth largest state', etc. etc. Could any recent reliable sources be provided just to back all such statements?
● Images are clear with no copyright violations

I have Edited the page to include data from the most recent census that had the information and I also revised some numbers which were not corresponding with the census data. EpicSnek ^{Talk to me here} 02:40, 25 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

History

● Again, this is written very well
● Harihara is wrongly linked (this is the correct link). Please relink correctly.
● In the last line, about Vishveshwaraya, just mentioning him is enough. No need to write about birthplace, which readers can get to know by clinking on his link.
● I believe that the Vijaynagara dynasty was one of the most important dynasty, and everything flourished under Krishnadevaraya's rule. However, such an important ruler has not been mentioned anywhere in the article.
● File:Mallikarjuna and Kasivisvanatha temples at Pattadakal.jpg - Image is fine

I have removed the unnecessary information and added some information on [Krishnadevaraya]]. Please give me through feedback on the Krishnadevaraya section.EpicSnek ^{Talk to me here} 03:05, 25 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Geography

● Written well; broad in its coverage
● Please provide recent sources for the last para which contains stats
● Image is good; could it be placed in a better position?

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 ● File:Mallikarjuna and Kasivisvanatha temples at Pattadakal.jpg  -  Image is fine
-I have removed the unnecessary information and added some information on [Krishnadevaraya]]. Please give me through feedback on the Krishnadevaraya section.
+I have removed the unnecessary information and added some information on [Krishnadevaraya]]. Please give me through feedback on the Krishnadevaraya section.<span style="background-color: azure">[[User:TheEpicSnek |<span style="color: #008080">EpicSnek </span>]] [[User talk:TheEpicSnek|<sup><span style="color: RoyalBlue"> Talk to me here </span></sup>]] </span> 03:05, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
 === Geography ===