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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 04:03, 2 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hoping to get to this within a few hours. This is my first time reviewing a sports-related article, so please bear with me! 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 04:03, 2 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I think that should be all! Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns so that I can know when to reevaluate. Thanks, 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 18:15, 2 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Earwig says good to go.

All images are relevant, good quality and copyright-free:

File:Flag of Mongolia.svg: valid public domain rationale;
File:Putin attended the opening ceremony of 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics (3).jpg: CC-BY-SA 4.0.

Batmönkhiin Achbadrakh and Enkhtuul Ariunsanaa are both wikilinked a few times. Only their first mentions in the lead and body of the article need to be wikilinked.
In the infobox, unlink Batmönkhiin Achbadrakh in Flag bearer (closing).
"the nation had sent two cross-country skiers, which were" – change to "who were"
"The delegation's best finish in any event was 65th by" – I would include 65th of 95 here for added context to readers.
Unlink the second mentions of opening ceremony and closing ceremony in Background.
Could Cross-country skiing be expanded upon at all? For instance, possibly how they were selected?
I would remove the first table (with the athletes) as unnecessary.

All sources used are RS. Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 1, 5, 8, 10, 13 or 17.

Find better publication names for the refs with urls (like www.olympics.com/).
I would remove the location parameter from ref 2 as this is the only such ciation.

Done I think, although I'm not quite sure what you mean by "Find better publication names"?

Navs, cats and most other templates good.

Done MasterMatt12^{💬 ● 📝} 23:22, 2 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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 *Find better publication names for the refs with urls (like www.olympics.com/).
 *I would remove the location parameter from ref 2 as this is the only such ciation.
+{{Done}} I think, although I'm not quite sure what you mean by "Find better publication names"?
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