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* fix word "despose" - it should be "depose"
*Insert word "Monster" after name.

fix word "despose" - it should be "depose"
* Improve the Embargo section
* Improve the Embargo section
* Get a peer review
* Get a peer review

Revision as of 20:27, 30 March 2007

  • Insert word "Monster" after name.

fix word "despose" - it should be "depose"

  • Improve the Embargo section
  • Get a peer review
  • Remove material well represented elsewhere - ie. much of the Foreign relations material. (see Foreign relations of Cuba)
  • Remove or reword material stating that "Castro repelled the Bag of Pigs invaders" or "Castro was forced to shut down 118 factories" - these were Cuban military and government actions.
  • Add a survey of what "rank" Castro was during famous military actions -- has he always been comandanté? what were the insignia on his lapels or epaulets, when he wore such things?
  • "External links" section must be cleaned up and better categorized
  • Remove "struggle for power" weasel formulations, this misleads into thinking that the only reason for the Cuban revolutionaries was "lust for power", while in fact they say they had a social patos against the Batista regime (believe it or not).
  • Change "...as part of their own global political game." to "...as part of their own global political agenda." in the fourth paragraph.