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== Cleanup tag ==

I just added the general cleanup tag to this article. Some things in the article that I think need cleanup are:
* tone/style ("How It All Begun!", "A Man With a Great Heart For God!", "He is not tall, and does not have a larger-than-life character. He does not dominate, nor has he accrued power to himself. He walks slowly, is relaxed, and has a gentle sense of humour with a warm smile and a twinkle in his eyes. He dresses simply, eats simply... and... could have assumed titles to himself." etc)
* wikification: there are few links in the article
* references/citations need to be formatted properly
* unnecessary trivia bits should be deleted or minimised (ie. stay on topic better)

- [[User:Iothiania|Iotha]] 21:51, 12 August 2007 (UTC)

Revision as of 21:51, 12 August 2007

Cleanup tag

I just added the general cleanup tag to this article. Some things in the article that I think need cleanup are:

  • tone/style ("How It All Begun!", "A Man With a Great Heart For God!", "He is not tall, and does not have a larger-than-life character. He does not dominate, nor has he accrued power to himself. He walks slowly, is relaxed, and has a gentle sense of humour with a warm smile and a twinkle in his eyes. He dresses simply, eats simply... and... could have assumed titles to himself." etc)
  • wikification: there are few links in the article
  • references/citations need to be formatted properly
  • unnecessary trivia bits should be deleted or minimised (ie. stay on topic better)

- Iotha 21:51, 12 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]