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This page needs to be merged with Union_School_District,_Tulsa. --Osfn8 02:18, 8 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Removed the line " Though it's band is much better, more money is spent on football, due to it being more popular in the area." Because that is more of a personal option...

you're not selling a product

This is a pretty low quality article... It sounds more like you're trying to sell the school district. Also, you've gotta remember not everyone who's reading this article knows what Union Public Schools are, so referring to it as 'Union' is not very systematic. You could call it "The District," "The school system," "it," "Union Public Schools," and things like that. Someone needs to sort through this someone who wrote it and clean it up a bit. JavaDog 04:00, 16 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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 Removed the line " Though it's band is much better, more money is spent on football, due to it being more popular in the area." Because that is more of a personal option...
+== you're not selling a product ==
+This is a pretty low quality article... It sounds more like you're trying to sell the school district. Also, you've gotta remember not everyone who's reading this article knows what Union Public Schools are, so referring to it as 'Union' is not very systematic. You could call it "The District," "The school system," "it," "Union Public Schools," and things like that. Someone needs to sort through this someone who wrote it and clean it up a bit. [[User:JavaDog|JavaDog]] 04:00, 16 September 2007 (UTC)