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Does anyone know how to correct the link I posted to men.style.com. It provides information on Corovan that verifys some of the info already on the page. pmb600 --[[User:Pmb600|Pmb600]] ([[User talk:Pmb600|talk]]) 06:19, 4 January 2008 (UTC) |
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Yes but what color is it? Black? Brown? Got a photo? --[[User:71.57.33.170|71.57.33.170]] 21:03, 30 March 2007 (UTC) |
Yes but what color is it? Black? Brown? Got a photo? --[[User:71.57.33.170|71.57.33.170]] 21:03, 30 March 2007 (UTC) |
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Does anyone know how to correct the link I posted to men.style.com. It provides information on Corovan that verifys some of the info already on the page. pmb600 --Pmb600 (talk) 06:19, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
Yes but what color is it? Black? Brown? Got a photo? --71.57.33.170 21:03, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
- As the article mentions the color is #893f45. It would be good to add a patch of this color directly in the article, but I don't know how to do that.--Lbeaumont 02:37, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
- I added a color infobox. Bradd 09:06, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
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The article reads like a marketing piece for the Horween leather company. Needs revision to eliminate bias and citations for the many claims made. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.106.105.54 (talk) 19:35, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
This article could use better organization. Specifically, each major sense of the word should have its own heading, rather than listing dissimilar meanings under bullet points. The color infobox would then fit under the heading devoted to the color Cordovan. Bradd 09:08, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
I have edited the prose and deleted information relating only to the city of Cordoba (which belongs under that city's page, not here), but it needs to be decided whether this is an article or a disambiguation page. Lirelyn 00:23, 15 October 2007 (UTC)