Talk:Tropical Storm Erin (2007)/GA1

GA Review

I will be reviewing this article as soon as I can. Shrewpelt (talk) 17:46, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

My thoughts:

• In the lead, you talk a little about how this tropical storm's name was retired, but do not mention it in the article's body. You will need to talk a little about that if you want that sentance to be in the lead.
  • Done. –Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 18:14, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
• "In Sisterdale, two people were killed when they were swept away stalled over Sister Creek[35]". You need a period in that sentence.
  • Done. –Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 18:14, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
• I noticed several redlinks; if articles are unlikely to be created for them, they probably should not be linked.
  • Done. –Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 18:14, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
• I find it very interesting that this storm redeveloped over land. Is there any information on why this happened?
  • The storm actually never redeveloped, but rather just formed in eye-like structure. In any event, there is no real known reason as to why that occurred. –Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 18:14, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
• "Nine water rescues occurred along the I-44 corridor, which was most impacted by Erin's rainfall.[49]" Mostly, perhaps?
  • Done. –Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 18:14, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

I have put this article on hold. Good luck! Shrewpelt (talk) 18:09, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

Just one more thing: add a citation for the last sentence in Impact, and then I will pass this article. Shrewpelt (talk) 19:13, 12 August 2008 (UTC)