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The paragraphs you added provide good information, but it might help to edit a little since there are various typing mistakes. It might also help to attempt to integrate your paragraphs with the rest since there seems to be a few repetition of information and awkward starts. Jcc349 (talk) 19:39, 19 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work, Luna! You really filled out the article well. Your list of references at the end is good, but I think it might be a good idea to cite in-text as well, showing which information you got from which source. A few minor typos:

There is an extra line between the second and third paragraph of the "origin and development" section.
In the first paragraph of "origin and dev.", second sentence, you wrote "...the Dongba script was created the founder..." I think you meant to say "by the founder".
In the "Usage" section, the first sentence of the first paragraph should be split into two sentences.
In "Structure and Form", second paragraph, second sentence, last word "meanningful" is spelled wrong.
Here and there a period at the end of a sentence doesn't have a space after it.

Overall, it looks great! --zcat13 (talk) 21:54, 19 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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 The paragraphs you added provide good information, but it might help to edit a little since there are various typing mistakes. It might also help to attempt to integrate your paragraphs with the rest since there seems to be a few repetition of information and awkward starts.
 [[User:Jcc349|Jcc349]] ([[User talk:Jcc349|talk]]) 19:39, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
+Nice work, Luna! You really filled out the article well. Your list of references at the end is good, but I think it might be a good idea to cite in-text as well, showing which information you got from which source. A few minor typos:
+*There is an extra line between the second and third paragraph of the "origin and development" section.
+*In the first paragraph of "origin and dev.", second sentence, you wrote "...the Dongba script was created the founder..." I think you meant to say "by the founder".
+*In the "Usage" section, the first sentence of the first paragraph should be split into two sentences.
+*In "Structure and Form", second paragraph, second sentence, last word "meanningful" is spelled wrong.
+*Here and there a period at the end of a sentence doesn't have a space after it.
+Overall, it looks great!
+--[[User:Zcat13|zcat13]] ([[User talk:Zcat13|talk]]) 21:54, 19 November 2008 (UTC)