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Original contained a lot of opinions, taken them out and reconstructed the sentences to be more general and less an opinion. |
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There's a lot of opinion in the intro, and things that can't be verified. Needs a cleanup. |
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[[User:Gegorg|Gegorg]] ([[User talk:Gegorg|talk]]) 08:40, 22 November 2008 (UTC) |
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Original contained a lot of opinions, taken them out and reconstructed the sentences to be more general and less an opinion.
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There's a lot of opinion in the intro, and things that can't be verified. Needs a cleanup. Gegorg (talk) 08:40, 22 November 2008 (UTC)