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:I will be looking forward to hearing you, Teenly. [[User:Fenneck|Fenneck]] ([[User talk:Fenneck|talk]]) 14:19, 2 February 2009 (UTC)
:I will be looking forward to hearing you, Teenly. [[User:Fenneck|Fenneck]] ([[User talk:Fenneck|talk]]) 14:19, 2 February 2009 (UTC)


Hi Fenneck. I am writing [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Teenly/Sandbox an article] about Adolf Jensen because there is no article about him. Will you please help me get it good enough? <font face="georgia"><b><i>[[User:Teenly|<font color="#701040">T</font><font color="#902050">e</font><font color="#b03060">e</font><font color="#do4070">n</font><font color="#b03060">l</font><font color="#902050">y</font>]] [[User talk:Teenly|<font color="#701040">(</font><small><font color="#902050">t</font><font color="#b03060">a</font><font color="#do4070">l</font><font color="#b03060">k</font></small><font color="#902050">)</font>]]</i></b></font> 17:14, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
Hi Fenneck. I am writing an article about Adolf Jensen because there is no article about him. Will you please help me get it good enough? <font face="georgia"><b><i>[[User:Teenly|<font color="#701040">T</font><font color="#902050">e</font><font color="#b03060">e</font><font color="#do4070">n</font><font color="#b03060">l</font><font color="#902050">y</font>]] [[User talk:Teenly|<font color="#701040">(</font><small><font color="#902050">t</font><font color="#b03060">a</font><font color="#do4070">l</font><font color="#b03060">k</font></small><font color="#902050">)</font>]]</i></b></font> 17:14, 14 February 2009 (UTC)


:It's a good start, Teenly. I would rather not change anything until you move it into article space, so it will be your article. Before you move it, you should do three things:
:It's a good start, Teenly. I would rather not change anything until you move it into article space, so it will be your article. Before you move it, you should do three things:
:* Make wikilinks to all the people and places that have articles. For people who don't have articles you can give their dates if you know them. Some people would make redlinks to people like Kienzl, but that's up to you.
:* Make wikilinks to all the people and places that have articles. For people who don't have articles you can give their dates if you know them. Some people would make redlinks to people like Kienzl, but that's up to you.
:* I think you should leave out the part about Jensen trying to use Wagner's harmonic ideas, even though I think it's true, unless you can find a good source for a footnote. Otherwise it's Original Research.
:* I think you should leave out the part about Jensen trying to use Wagner's harmonic ideas, even though I think it's true, unless you can find a good source for a footnote. Otherwise it's Original Research.
:* Put a References section at the end for the two books. Look [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Reference here] in the places where it says "General Reference" to find out how.
:* Put a References section at the end for the two books. Look at ''Wikipedia:Citing sources'' in the places where it says "General Reference" to find out how.
:Are the first editions of Baker and Grove your own? [[User:Fenneck|Fenneck]] ([[User talk:Fenneck|talk]]) 19:31, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
:Are the first editions of Baker and Grove your own? [[User:Fenneck|Fenneck]] ([[User talk:Fenneck|talk]]) 19:31, 14 February 2009 (UTC)


Yes they are, Fenneck. My first piano teacher died when I was four and maybe he liked me because he gave me all of his music and books. I did what you said and then I put the [[Adolf Jensen|article]] in the encyclopedia. I know it does not sound grown up. I hope you will fix it and make it better so it won't get deleted. <font face="georgia"><b><i>[[User:Teenly|<font color="#701040">T</font><font color="#902050">e</font><font color="#b03060">e</font><font color="#do4070">n</font><font color="#b03060">l</font><font color="#902050">y</font>]] [[User talk:Teenly|<font color="#701040">(</font><small><font color="#902050">t</font><font color="#b03060">a</font><font color="#do4070">l</font><font color="#b03060">k</font></small><font color="#902050">)</font>]]</i></b></font> 00:17, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
Yes they are, Fenneck. My first piano teacher died when I was four and maybe he liked me because he gave me all of his music and books. I did what you said and then I put the article in the encyclopedia. I know it does not sound grown up. I hope you will fix it and make it better so it won't get deleted. <font face="georgia"><b><i>[[User:Teenly|<font color="#701040">T</font><font color="#902050">e</font><font color="#b03060">e</font><font color="#do4070">n</font><font color="#b03060">l</font><font color="#902050">y</font>]] [[User talk:Teenly|<font color="#701040">(</font><small><font color="#902050">t</font><font color="#b03060">a</font><font color="#do4070">l</font><font color="#b03060">k</font></small><font color="#902050">)</font>]]</i></b></font> 00:17, 15 February 2009 (UTC)


:I started copy editing your Jensen article but I didn't have the heart to change the words you worked so hard on. Your writing is much better than it was just a couple of months ago, and I don't see any reason why anyone would want to delete your article. Why don't we just leave it the way you wrote it so you can admire it for awhile? If somebody else comes along and makes a hash of it, then I'll fix it up. In the meantime I'll add some categories and things. OK? [[User:Fenneck|Fenneck]] ([[User talk:Fenneck|talk]]) 03:11, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
:I started copy editing your Jensen article but I didn't have the heart to change the words you worked so hard on. Your writing is much better than it was just a couple of months ago, and I don't see any reason why anyone would want to delete your article. Why don't we just leave it the way you wrote it so you can admire it for awhile? If somebody else comes along and makes a hash of it, then I'll fix it up. In the meantime I'll add some categories and things. OK? [[User:Fenneck|Fenneck]] ([[User talk:Fenneck|talk]]) 03:11, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

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Hi Fenneck

Hello Fenneck. My name is Teenly. I wrote on the talk page for the Elektra chord. What you wrote there about the Hendrix chord is so funny! How did you make your user name look like So-called Fenneck? It was just Fenneck before. Teenly (talk) 20:08, 23 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I'm pleased to meet you, Teenly. I'll tell you how I changed the way my username looks if you tell me how you figured out that a hatful of notes that are not E,B,Db,F or Ab is the dominant thirteenth of G minor. You'll have to click on the word "edit" at the far right of the line that begins Hi Fenneck and read my answer in the edit window or it won't make sense.
Look up the page at the end of your note to me. First I cut and paste everything that's AFTER "It was just Fenneck before." and BEFORE the time, like this:
Teenly (talk)
The part that says User talk:Teenly|talk just makes the (talk) link after your user name. We want to keep that so we won't mess with it. What we want to change is the first part, which says User:Teenly|Teenly. See the vertical line in the middle? What's BEFORE the vertical line (User:Teenly) is the title of the page you want to link to. (User:Teenly is the name of your user page.) The part AFTER the vertical line is what you actually see on the screen:
What you actually see (talk)
If you click on "What you actually see" you'll go to your user page. We didn't copy the date because it was yesterday's date. To get the right date, put five tildes (instead of four) at the end like this:
So-called Teenly (talk) 17:16, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Get it? But never change your user name to another editor's user name, OK? Some Guy Named Fenneck (talk) 17:16, 24 September 2008 (UTC).[reply]

The tildes turned into the date but I see how you do it. Here's how I figured out the thirteenth chord. The hatful of notes that are not E,B,Db,F or Ab are C,D,Eb,Gb,G,A,Bb. There is a diminished seventh chord C,Eb,Gb,A. A major dominant thirteenth doesn't have a diminished seventh chord in it so there must be a minor ninth. The diminished seventh has to be the third, fifth, seventh and minor ninth but you can't tell which note is which. The three notes left over have to be the root, eleventh and thirteenth of the thirteenth chord. That is the same as root, fourth and sixth which is a second inversion triad. The fifth of the triad is the root of the thirteenth chord. It is a major triad if there is a major thirteenth and a minor triad if there is a minor thirteenth. The left over notes are D G Bb. That is a minor triad so the thirteenth is minor. The fifth of the triad is D so the root of the thirteenth chord is D. That makes it the dominant thirteenth of G minor D,F#,A,C,Eb,G,Bb. There is another way to do it but that's how I did it. Thanks! Teenly (talk) 23:54, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Well thought out! I hope this gives you a smile rather than offending you: for some reason I had conceived the possibility that you might be a child. It would be a rare child indeed who was capable of reasoning on such a high level! Please accept my apologies if apologies are needed, although I believe a childlike quality is very much to be treasured. Fenneck (talk) 16:35, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It's OK because I just turned eight. I don't feel like a little girl any more. Now I am big enough to play octaves! I can even reach the ninths in the A major Polonaise where you put your thumb across two notes. For my birthday my teacher let me pick out any piece I wanted to learn, and I picked Feux Follets by Liszt. Teenly (talk) 20:22, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

You must be an exceptionally fine player, Teenly. I was ten before I could play Feux Follets. May I make a suggestion? I think it's a good idea not to tell any more about yourself than you really have to on Wikipedia. If it's all right with you, I'd like to delete the part of our conversation that tells how old you are. It will still be in my talk page history, but unless I start behaving very badly there's no special reason why anyone would want to look there. Since you're not a little girl any more I won't do it without your permission. If you aren't sure, why don't you ask whoever you ask for advice when you want advice, for, um ... advice? um ... Fenneck (talk) 14:54, 26 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

OK Fenneck, I give you permission. I saw a talk page where somebody told a boy that what he thinks doesn't matter because he is only in high school. I wonder what he would tell me! Teenly (talk) 21:04, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Fenneck. It was funny when you said the Wiki Police would make us read Music Theory articles. They are awful aren't they? You don't have to answer this note. It's just to make a link like you said. Teenly (talk) 20:20, 30 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Fenneck. I was reading what I wrote on the talk page for Petrushka chord and it sounds like baby talk. Will you help me write it better? Teenly (talk) 20:21, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

If you need help with anything, I would be glad to help you with it; but you made some good improvements to the wording of the Judith Barsi article, and if you realize your note on the Petrushka chord page sounds like baby talk, you should be able to make it better without my help. If you make an honest try at fixing it up by yourself, I'll help you with it if it still sounds like baby talk. You could copy the whole note to Notepad (or whatever you like to use for writing notes) on your desktop and take as long as you want to fix it, then copy it back. Take your time. Fenneck (talk) 22:41, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

How's that? Teenly (talk) 00:07, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

You know it's good, Teenly. I have to go somewhere, so I won't be able to answer your notes for a few days. Just take your time, write your posts so they sound good to you, and you'll do just fine. Fenneck (talk) 18:23, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Fenneck. How do you like my new signature? Teenly 23:26, 5 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It's very elegant. Did you design and code it yourself? How is "Feux Follets" coming along? Fenneck (talk) 03:12, 6 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I found a signature I liked and I changed some things so I liked it better. Then I made most of the markup into HTML. I wish I could have a "talk" thingy but then it's too long for the signature box. I can only put it in with the So-Called Fenneck trick. I can play Feux Follets all the way through by heart, but it's not really good yet. Teenly (talk) 21:43, 7 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Fenneck. You have been away for a long time. Were you sick? I hope you are all right. I got a bad flu or something and my leukemia came back. I couldn't practise for a long time. Now I get tired very soon and I sound like I'm playing the piano with my feet. Teenly (talk) 21:25, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I am so sorry you've been sick, Teenly. I know how anxious you must be to get your technique back, but please don't overtire yourself. Can you play easier music for fun? You are right, I was sick too, but I'm fine now. Fenneck (talk) 17:52, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I'm glad you're feeling better. Before when I played the piano I only had to listen and I could hear the music because my hands played whatever I wanted to hear. They did it all by themselves, like magic. But now the magic does not work. Not even with easy pieces. Maybe I can not say it very well, but do you know what I mean, Fenneck? Teenly (talk) 21:54, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure, Teenly. Do you mean you just imagine the sound and whatever you imagine your hands play without you having to think about it? Sometimes when I am playing my very best, it feels as though I am listening to someone else playing, and someone else plays exactly the way I like. Is that anything like what you mean? But I only play that way once in a blue moon. It sounds as though that's how you always play. Fenneck (talk) 15:41, 29 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

It is hard to talk about it Fenneck. It is not I imagine the music first and then I play it. It is more I listen listen listen and there is music like when it rains, not on purpose. It is not like playing a cd or something. A cd is like a picture of rain and playing is like it is raining. That is how I always play when I am playing. When I learn a piece I have to practise to do it by myself first and then I can play it. Teenly (talk) 20:17, 31 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

You make me feel very sorry for myself, Teenly. I hope someday I will be able to hear you play like rain. When you said "I can play Feux Follets all the way through by heart, but it's not really good yet" did you mean you can't play it the way you are describing? Most students believe that when they can play a piece through from memory, it's time to move on to the next piece. (By the way, do you know "Jardins sous la pluie"?) Fenneck (talk) 18:02, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

You are funny, Fenneck. When I am better maybe my teacher will help me make something for my talk page so you can hear me play. You are right, I still have to play Feux Follets all by myself. I have learned the whole Estampes so I can play just what it says in the book but not good. I will get it good some day. Teenly (talk) 20:03, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I will be looking forward to hearing you, Teenly. Fenneck (talk) 14:19, 2 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Fenneck. I am writing an article about Adolf Jensen because there is no article about him. Will you please help me get it good enough? Teenly (talk) 17:14, 14 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

It's a good start, Teenly. I would rather not change anything until you move it into article space, so it will be your article. Before you move it, you should do three things:
  • Make wikilinks to all the people and places that have articles. For people who don't have articles you can give their dates if you know them. Some people would make redlinks to people like Kienzl, but that's up to you.
  • I think you should leave out the part about Jensen trying to use Wagner's harmonic ideas, even though I think it's true, unless you can find a good source for a footnote. Otherwise it's Original Research.
  • Put a References section at the end for the two books. Look at Wikipedia:Citing sources in the places where it says "General Reference" to find out how.
Are the first editions of Baker and Grove your own? Fenneck (talk) 19:31, 14 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Yes they are, Fenneck. My first piano teacher died when I was four and maybe he liked me because he gave me all of his music and books. I did what you said and then I put the article in the encyclopedia. I know it does not sound grown up. I hope you will fix it and make it better so it won't get deleted. Teenly (talk) 00:17, 15 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I started copy editing your Jensen article but I didn't have the heart to change the words you worked so hard on. Your writing is much better than it was just a couple of months ago, and I don't see any reason why anyone would want to delete your article. Why don't we just leave it the way you wrote it so you can admire it for awhile? If somebody else comes along and makes a hash of it, then I'll fix it up. In the meantime I'll add some categories and things. OK? Fenneck (talk) 03:11, 15 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I made links (on the bottom left of your article) to the Jensen articles on the German, Japanese and Russian Wikipedias. I think they are the only ones with articles about Jensen. Then I went to the German, Japanese and Russian Wikipedias and linked their articles about Jensen back to your article. Fenneck (talk) 03:50, 15 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Fenneck. I can't believe that if somebody over in Russia or Japan or Germany clicks on English they will see my article! I am still not strong to practice a lot, that is why I had time to work on the article. When I was too sick to play the piano I must have read a hundred books. Maybe that is what helped me write better. Teenly (talk) 16:13, 15 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

When I was on German Wikipedia setting up the interwiki link to your Jensen article, I noticed you have some edits over there too. You are quite the girl for surprises, so I won't be surprised if you learn to write very well indeed. If you can learn to write with assurance about things you don't understand, you'll be well on your way to your PhD. Fenneck (talk) 01:02, 16 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]