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There are a bunch of sections describing various types of alarm sensors that end with a conclusion section. This is blatant original research, and should be removed as per [[WP:SYN]]<nowiki>.</nowiki> [[User:Javawizard|-- Javawizard]] ([[User talk:Javawizard|talk]]) 05:09, 31 August 2008 (UTC) |
There are a bunch of sections describing various types of alarm sensors that end with a conclusion section. This is blatant original research, and should be removed as per [[WP:SYN]]<nowiki>.</nowiki> [[User:Javawizard|-- Javawizard]] ([[User talk:Javawizard|talk]]) 05:09, 31 August 2008 (UTC) |
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:Could you site some specific examples? I believe I can fix them (without deletion) if I knew what the specific contended sections are. |
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Revision as of 00:37, 27 March 2009
"Home Security" links here. It needs it's own article though. Home Security and Burglar Alarms are not similar enough to have an ambiguation link.
Sources are outdated. This article needs updating.
The sources quoted and the information contained in this article are far outdated and should be updated immediately.
Sources
The following source is not link spam:
- Then what is it? -Will Beback 20:41, 30 October 2006 (UTC)
- The source material. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.34.68.186 (talk) 00:35, 27 March 2009 (UTC)
Broadband
Warrenlead (talk) 05:22, 12 April 2008 (UTC) The Section on Broadband is definitely outdated. There are new products out now that use Internet plus GPRS Mobile Broadband with fall back to PSTN. These systems out perform all current standards. see http://www.uhssystems.com/products.php
Original Research
There are a bunch of sections describing various types of alarm sensors that end with a conclusion section. This is blatant original research, and should be removed as per WP:SYN. -- Javawizard (talk) 05:09, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
- Could you site some specific examples? I believe I can fix them (without deletion) if I knew what the specific contended sections are.
unprofessional
"Burglar (or intrusion), fire, and safety alarms are all electronic today." The opening sounds like something from uncyclopedia. This whole article should be updated. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.27.58.80 (talk) 06:16, 17 December 2008 (UTC)