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Recently this article was redirected to the Film adaptation, Ring 0: Birthday. The Ring 0: Birthday Manga and Ring 0: Birthday Film are two separate versions and should be treated as such. Gsuademola (talk) 00:41, 10 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I would like to open discussion in regards to this article's nomination for deletion. In hopes of saving this article from deletion I am requesting help in improving it and bringing it up to Wikipedia standards, a under construction tag was added to postpone deletion so I and others are given time to work on the article. I will address the issues brought up in the deletion tag, such as; improving syntax and sentence structure, copyediting, and providing proper citations. Gsuademola (talk) 18:21, 12 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

After my first wave of edits there are inconsistencies between the first paragraph and the two following paragraphs, rest assured; the issue will be addressed today. Gsuademola (talk) 20:38, 12 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Expanded the plot summary, introduction, and heading. Properly cited 2/3rds of sources, corrected grammatical errors, added hyperlinks, corrected spelling. Things to do: Finish expanding the plot summary by adding to the conclusion and making note of the manga's climax, properly cite the remaining sources, removed the deletion tag, and remove the under construction tag. Gsuademola (talk) 05:49, 13 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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	After my first wave of edits there are inconsistencies between the first paragraph and the two following paragraphs, rest assured; the issue will be addressed today. [[User:Gsuademola\|Gsuademola]] ([[User talk:Gsuademola\|talk]]) 20:38, 12 October 2009 (UTC)		After my first wave of edits there are inconsistencies between the first paragraph and the two following paragraphs, rest assured; the issue will be addressed today. [[User:Gsuademola\|Gsuademola]] ([[User talk:Gsuademola\|talk]]) 20:38, 12 October 2009 (UTC)

			Expanded the plot summary, introduction, and heading. Properly cited 2/3rds of sources, corrected grammatical errors, added hyperlinks, corrected spelling. Things to do: Finish expanding the plot summary by adding to the conclusion and making note of the manga's climax, properly cite the remaining sources, removed the deletion tag, and remove the under construction tag. [[User:Gsuademola\|Gsuademola]] ([[User talk:Gsuademola\|talk]]) 05:49, 13 October 2009 (UTC)