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Pyrotechnics: Edit: Evidently for Ostensibly

"The foam caused the fire to spread rapidly and the resulting fire led to 100 deaths, ostensibly because their quick escape was blocked by ineffective exit doors."

May I suggest replacing "ostensibly" with "evidently" and removing "because."— Preceding unsigned comment added by Karl de Jong (talk • contribs)

Homemade Flashpots

Does this section really have a legitimate place in this entry? This is intended to be an encyclopedia, and this section does not detail the construction or operation of flashpots in general, and is primarily an assault on the practice of homebuilding them. An encyclopedia does not have the authority to say "should" or "shouldn't". At the most, this paragraph should be changed to make the danger known, and nothing else. 97.113.65.212 (talk) 08:03, 15 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I (WikiPyroEngineer) propose to delete the homemade flashpots. Although originally it is most likely contributed with the best possible intentions, I think it is time to clean up this section, and the page in its entirety.

Last two paragraphs need reworking

The last two paragraphs of this article have many, many capitalized words, and need reworking, if not deletion. --DThomsen8 (talk) 01:57, 1 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Safe (?) Fireworks

so called Safe Fireworks were made in germany in 1900s.Cosisted on various tyubes with colorful lithograph designs(cannons, toweres etc) That "fired" streamers, cottton balls etc.No mention of Safe Fireworks in article!(Decided/DatedAMMorn,Sat.July 4th,2009 21st cent. Dr.Edson Andre' Johnson D>D>ULC) SWORDINHAND (talk) 17:24, 4 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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 Does this section really have a legitimate place in this entry? This is intended to be an encyclopedia, and this section does not detail the construction or operation of flashpots in general, and is primarily an assault on the practice of homebuilding them. An encyclopedia does not have the authority to say "should" or "shouldn't". At the most, this paragraph should be changed to make the danger known, and nothing else.
 [[Special:Contributions/97.113.65.212|97.113.65.212]] ([[User talk:97.113.65.212|talk]]) 08:03, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
+I (WikiPyroEngineer) propose to delete the homemade flashpots. Although originally it is most likely contributed with the best possible intentions, I think it is time to clean up this section, and the page in its entirety.
 == Last two paragraphs need reworking ==