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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cadoi/Leonid_Polterovich

Comments before I post this article?

Cadoi (talk) 02:28, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

Please try adding some more descriptive names to the references - bare URL links aren't really encouraged. If you are unsure, you can do this like this - <ref>[[http://www.apple.com|Apple homepage]]</ref>. Chevymontecarlo - alt 11:41, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Info/Six_Lowa_Records

Jennyrod (talk) 04:04, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

The article has been tagged for deletion as it doesn't meet the general notability guideline. You can address these issues by taking a look at WP:ORG or WP:CORP. -Reconsider! 12:30, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lana_Myers

Would love for someone to take the time to validate the information on this page. Thanks in advance.

DomainWorldAccess (talk) 04:22, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

Please try adding more useful names to the references so the reader can get an idea of what the linked page is about. Also please consider adding links and/or an Infobox as well. Chevymontecarlo - alt 11:43, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Illusoir3/Inner_City_Elegance

Just looking for some feedback, and the pictures only seem to be working on certain browsers... Thanks!

Illusoir3 (talk) 07:41, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

The main issue here is the notability of the subject. Please take a look at WP:MUSIC for more information regarding the notability criteria for bands. -Reconsider! 09:12, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

References help to improve the notability of the article's subject. According to WP:CITE, Wikipedia cannot be used as a reference, so please remove the link and move it to the 'External links' section if you can. Chevymontecarlo - alt 11:48, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Master_Piano_Technicians_of_America

New article I'd like to have reviewed. Also, I'm not sure if I did something wrong when moving it. It still has the notice on top as not being an article but as being a draft in userspace, and the article still does not show up in search. Did I get something wrong in the move, or does it just take a while for the server to update? Many thanks for taking the time to help a noob with his first article. :)

Pianotech (talk) 12:53, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Papagel/EFront_%28eLearning_software%29

Please provide your comments on this article regarding structure, notability, neutral tone and sources. Thanks for your help!

Papagel (talk) 13:08, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/University_Consulting

This is a new article (my first on Wikipedia). I would love feedback or questions or review from some of the more veteran Wikipedia users. Thanks.

Moremarbles (talk) 14:54, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Regstuff/Project_GreenHands

This is an article on an environmental organization based in India. I'm affiliated with this organization so I wanted to make sure that the article was neutral before I went live. Appreciate any feedback.

Regstuff (talk) 15:08, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Douglas_Mental_Health_University_Institute_Foundation

I want to know when my article will be either approved or rejected and thus the comment box at the top that says "this is a template to be removed after the article has been reviewed" will be removed? That having been said, I would like to know if you have any feedback to my article? I'm a first-time user and I don't know if I have request feedback or if my article will eventually be reviewed. Let me know if I need to do anything else.

Thank you in advance for your help! It is much appreciated.

TijanaP (talk) 15:42, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Veterans'_Memorial_Hall

I would welcome any feedback in order to improve this article. Thank you in advance!

MtRainier7 (talk) 17:06, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mohitmarwaha07/Enter_your_new_article_name_here

i have written an article i want your suggestion whether its good enough to be published. and how to change heading of the article

mohit marwaha 17:56, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/EM_Research,_Inc.

Need some valuable feedback, please.

Anitambowers (talk) 18:53, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pitch_constellation

Could someone review this article and remve the "new unreviewed article" template?

Thanks

72.94.156.208 (talk) 19:47, 25 June 2010 (UTC)