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This is a very interesting article. My suggestions for further development are: |
This is a very interesting article. My suggestions for further development are: |
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*"In the end of the war" is a bit vague - can you provide an approximate date? |
*"In the end of the war" is a bit vague - can you provide an approximate date? |
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:{{completed}} Do you think it's all right now? |
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*The article could do with a copy edit |
*The article could do with a copy edit |
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:{{completed}} listed with the requests page at [[WP:GOCE]] |
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*It would be interesting if the article discussed how it was intended to employ the aircraft in combat, and the feasibility of these plans - am I right in thinking that it was to be launched as a stand-off weapon from other aircraft? (which of course means that it was highly vulnerable to these carrier aircraft being attacked) |
*It would be interesting if the article discussed how it was intended to employ the aircraft in combat, and the feasibility of these plans - am I right in thinking that it was to be launched as a stand-off weapon from other aircraft? (which of course means that it was highly vulnerable to these carrier aircraft being attacked) |
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*Similarly, the article should identify why the project was cancelled (presumably as it proved impractical). [[User:Nick-D|Nick-D]] ([[User talk:Nick-D|talk]]) 01:58, 1 August 2010 (UTC) |
*Similarly, the article should identify why the project was cancelled (presumably as it proved impractical). [[User:Nick-D|Nick-D]] ([[User talk:Nick-D|talk]]) 01:58, 1 August 2010 (UTC) |
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Revision as of 05:10, 4 August 2010
I think this article is now ready for peer review, since I have taken it to B-class, and am wishing to be able to make content additions and edit the prose and I would like other editors to help me. AirplaneProRadioChecklist 00:18, 30 July 2010 (UTC)
Nick-D
This is a very interesting article. My suggestions for further development are:
- "In the end of the war" is a bit vague - can you provide an approximate date?
Completed Do you think it's all right now?
- The article could do with a copy edit
- Completed listed with the requests page at WP:GOCE
- It would be interesting if the article discussed how it was intended to employ the aircraft in combat, and the feasibility of these plans - am I right in thinking that it was to be launched as a stand-off weapon from other aircraft? (which of course means that it was highly vulnerable to these carrier aircraft being attacked)
- Similarly, the article should identify why the project was cancelled (presumably as it proved impractical). Nick-D (talk) 01:58, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
- Completed