User talk:Winona2012/sandbox: Difference between revisions

Content deleted Content added

Inline

Revision as of 19:41, 19 February 2011

CSkibba07 This looks good so far. Your research is starting to prove that there is no deterring effect by having the death penalty in place. You should however, have some studies that prove it does deter crime if such studies do exist

I appreciate the use of differing points of view on the topic. A few small grammatical errors. Kdrost09 (talk) 22:34, 14 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Good job getting information about deterrence but as the above comment you should get both sides. Jessben12 (talk)

Good start with multiple resources...keep it up! AHughes08 (talk) 22:19, 14 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Very nice start! I think you have plenty of information for a solid literature review! Cbrignull07

This is an interesting topic with viewpoints that are clearly defined. You paragraphs included both of them, which is good. It will be interesting to see how this project develops over the course of the semester. Good luck! Swpols410 (talk) 19:41, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Revision as of 23:11, 14 February 2011 edit Winona2012 (talk \| contribs) 25 edits Moved lit review comments to sandbox discussion ← Previous edit		Revision as of 19:41, 19 February 2011 edit undo Swpols410 (talk \| contribs) 29 edits No edit summary Next edit →
Line 9:		Line 9:

	Very nice start! I think you have plenty of information for a solid literature review! [[User: Cbrignull07\|Cbrignull07]]		Very nice start! I think you have plenty of information for a solid literature review! [[User: Cbrignull07\|Cbrignull07]]

			This is an interesting topic with viewpoints that are clearly defined. You paragraphs included both of them, which is good. It will be interesting to see how this project develops over the course of the semester. Good luck! [[User:Swpols410\|Swpols410]] ([[User talk:Swpols410\|talk]]) 19:41, 19 February 2011 (UTC)