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Got the short-straw here :P Did a round of pruning and removed about 70% of the garbage in there, but left "overdetailed" warning up - someone still needs to reduce it further. |
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Can someone who can actually speak English re-write the plot section ? <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/94.11.57.30|94.11.57.30]] ([[User talk:94.11.57.30|talk]]) 19:34, 25 August 2010 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
Can someone who can actually speak English re-write the plot section ? <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/94.11.57.30|94.11.57.30]] ([[User talk:94.11.57.30|talk]]) 19:34, 25 August 2010 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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'''DONE'''!! :) SOMEONE ELSE STILL NEEDS TO PRUNE IT THOUGH!! I got it from 5 pages to a little over 2, but I'm not touching that nightmare again ;-P [[User:SangerRainsford|SangerRainsford]] ([[User talk:SangerRainsford|talk]]) 00:08, 3 March 2011 (UTC) |
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I know I should just do it myself but can we get a re-write on this? The plot synopsis sounds like it was written by a 12 year old. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/66.58.183.94|66.58.183.94]] ([[User talk:66.58.183.94|talk]]) 23:00, 20 July 2010 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
I know I should just do it myself but can we get a re-write on this? The plot synopsis sounds like it was written by a 12 year old. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/66.58.183.94|66.58.183.94]] ([[User talk:66.58.183.94|talk]]) 23:00, 20 July 2010 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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Can someone who can actually speak English re-write the plot section ? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 94.11.57.30 (talk) 19:34, 25 August 2010 (UTC) DONE!! :) SOMEONE ELSE STILL NEEDS TO PRUNE IT THOUGH!! I got it from 5 pages to a little over 2, but I'm not touching that nightmare again ;-P SangerRainsford (talk) 00:08, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
I know I should just do it myself but can we get a re-write on this? The plot synopsis sounds like it was written by a 12 year old. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.58.183.94 (talk) 23:00, 20 July 2010 (UTC)
Plot appear to be way too long. — Ched (talk) 14:42, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
Not only is the plot synopsis a grammatical nightmare, there are many glaring mistakes and as well as many assumptions presented as fact. Sorry, but I don't have the time or motivation to rewrite the bible. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.47.43.110 (talk) 10:56, 12 February 2009 (UTC)
- I removed the whole "Plot" section since it was far too long to even have a temporary presence in this article. If the original one is to be shortened or a new one to be written, follow the guidelines at WP:FILMPLOT. —Erik (talk • contrib) 16:16, 12 February 2009 (UTC)