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This article is absolutely horrible. Most of it has been made up or written from memory. He was 17 when he was taken - he was not given by a chief - no idea where they got that from. I think most of the article should be deleted as it is misleading. |
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Revision as of 23:44, 6 December 2011
Inconsistant.
-Repeats the first section (main summary part I would call it). -Says he is 7 then 10 then 7 -Says he is kidnapped and then volentered to go
& Few other things, article needs work.
This article is absolutely horrible. Most of it has been made up or written from memory. He was 17 when he was taken - he was not given by a chief - no idea where they got that from. I think most of the article should be deleted as it is misleading.