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== Anthropology: Environment and Society Review== |
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Hello, I chose your article to review for the course, and found it very informative. There is good information presented in an un-biased way. I made a few grammatical changes also. I was glad to see you created new sections and expanded on the History of the movement. It may help to have a few more sources of information. I was, for the most part, unable to find any major problems with the article. [[User:Notlock|Notlock]] ([[User talk:Notlock|talk]]) 14:15, 13 November 2012 (UTC) |
Hello, I chose your article to review for the course, and found it very informative. There is good information presented in an un-biased way. I made a few grammatical changes also. I was glad to see you created new sections and expanded on the History of the movement. It may help to have a few more sources of information. I was, for the most part, unable to find any major problems with the article. [[User:Notlock|Notlock]] ([[User talk:Notlock|talk]]) 14:15, 13 November 2012 (UTC) |
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Actually, scratch that, the grammatical errors I noticed before are no longer there. [[User:Notlock|Notlock]] ([[User talk:Notlock|talk]]) 14:20, 13 November 2012 (UTC) |
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I'm creating this page as an editor for my anthropology class.
Anthropology: Environment and Society Review
[edit]Hello, I chose your article to review for the course, and found it very informative. There is good information presented in an un-biased way. I made a few grammatical changes also. I was glad to see you created new sections and expanded on the History of the movement. It may help to have a few more sources of information. I was, for the most part, unable to find any major problems with the article. Notlock (talk) 14:15, 13 November 2012 (UTC)
Actually, scratch that, the grammatical errors I noticed before are no longer there. Notlock (talk) 14:20, 13 November 2012 (UTC)