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I changed the intro to remove a lot of marketing-speak about "aesthetically enhancing the natural size" of breasts etc. Here's my edit: [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Breast_augmentation&diff=557874290&oldid=554982408]. [[User:Gronky|Gronky]] ([[User talk:Gronky|talk]]) 19:56, 1 June 2013 (UTC) |
I changed the intro to remove a lot of marketing-speak about "aesthetically enhancing the natural size" of breasts etc. Here's my edit: [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Breast_augmentation&diff=557874290&oldid=554982408]. [[User:Gronky|Gronky]] ([[User talk:Gronky|talk]]) 19:56, 1 June 2013 (UTC) |
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Technique section
might we be able to add a technique section?
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image filenames
all the attempts at keyword spamming in image filenames ("Dr._Placik_Chicago_Arlington_Heights_IL") needs to go. thank you dr placik for contributing but please keep filenames generic. this is not an advertising venue for your practice nor an acceptable method of stuffing keywords into search engines. 75.129.62.48 (talk) 10:13, 5 May 2012 (UTC)
"Enlargement" is more neutral than "aumentation"
There's a discussion elsewhere which might be more relevant here:
. Gronky (talk) 12:37, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
Missing Size Info
This article is severly information-limited, eschewing basic information for speculation and critical conversation instead. Please consider revisiting the basics of Wikipedia regarding this article!
At the very least there needs to be present a table(s) relating gram-weight sizes to final cup-sizes, and a presentation of size increase after implant. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.2.69.235 (talk) 03:10, 6 August 2012 (UTC)
Let's not use marketing terms
I changed the intro to remove a lot of marketing-speak about "aesthetically enhancing the natural size" of breasts etc. Here's my edit: [1]. Gronky (talk) 19:56, 1 June 2013 (UTC)
- Follow up response:
- I have edited the text, and restored the medical article impartiality.