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Feedback from Rob

Nice work. I would add a map of Venus and locate Ovda Regio on it. This may work better as the main image at the top right, as I feel your current one might be better suited for one of the other sections. Also, if you are going to refer to Ovda as a "Regio" in other parts of your text, it would be good to define exactly what a Regio is (is it specifically a crustal plateau?). A few grammatical errors but other than that looks great! Robnarmour1018 (talk) 00:31, 31 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Shelby

There are quite a few grammatical issues here, but those are pretty easy to fix. The entire last half of your page is pretty much what was already on my page.

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+There are quite a few grammatical issues here, but those are pretty easy to fix. The entire last half of your page is pretty much what was already on my page.
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