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I'm very impressed with the presentation of this article. You cited your sources really well, and you broke it up into comprehendible sections. |
I'm very impressed with the presentation of this article. You cited your sources really well, and you broke it up into comprehendible sections. |
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Are there any pictures you could add to break it up a little more? |
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Are there any pictures you could add to break it up a little more? <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:V c fitzgerald|V c fitzgerald]] ([[User talk:V c fitzgerald|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/V c fitzgerald|contribs]]) 03:55, 10 November 2015 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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Good job with the references and in-text citations. Make sure that all typos are corrected and that your writing reflects an encyclopedia entry. Mospence15 (talk) 03:01, 10 November 2015 (UTC)
I'm very impressed with the presentation of this article. You cited your sources really well, and you broke it up into comprehendible sections. Are there any pictures you could add to break it up a little more?