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==Merger proposal==
==Merger proposal==
[[HP Enterprise Business]] page should not be merged into this article as a) it is significantly out of date - HP Enterprise Business became HP Enterprise Group more than three years ago b) HP Enterprise Group is just one of four major business units to make up Hewlett Packard Enterprise.
[[HP Enterprise Business]] page should not be merged into this article as a) it is significantly out of date - HP Enterprise Business became HP Enterprise Group more than three years ago b) HP Enterprise Group is just one of four major business units to make up Hewlett Packard Enterprise.

Agreed: In Hewlett Packard Enterprise, the Enterprise Group is one element of the company with three other areas, Enterprise Services, Software and Financial Services. Enterprise Group should be referred to in the new Hewlett Packard Enterprise page, including the four main areas of Enterprise Group. The old HP Enterprise Business page is out of date.


Suggest [[HP Enterprise Business]] be appropriately updated and linked to from [[Hewlett Packard Enterprise]] <small><span class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:82.1.197.37|82.1.197.37]] ([[User talk:82.1.197.37|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/82.1.197.37|contribs]]) </span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned -->
Suggest [[HP Enterprise Business]] be appropriately updated and linked to from [[Hewlett Packard Enterprise]] <small><span class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:82.1.197.37|82.1.197.37]] ([[User talk:82.1.197.37|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/82.1.197.37|contribs]]) </span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned -->

Revision as of 18:14, 27 December 2015

Merger proposal

HP Enterprise Business page should not be merged into this article as a) it is significantly out of date - HP Enterprise Business became HP Enterprise Group more than three years ago b) HP Enterprise Group is just one of four major business units to make up Hewlett Packard Enterprise.

Agreed: In Hewlett Packard Enterprise, the Enterprise Group is one element of the company with three other areas, Enterprise Services, Software and Financial Services. Enterprise Group should be referred to in the new Hewlett Packard Enterprise page, including the four main areas of Enterprise Group. The old HP Enterprise Business page is out of date.

Suggest HP Enterprise Business be appropriately updated and linked to from Hewlett Packard Enterprise — Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.1.197.37 (talkcontribs)

I do not think the HP Enterprise Business and Hewlett Packard Enterprise articles are strong enough to warrant two different entries. --Svgalbertian (talk) 14:32, 1 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Agreed. The former unit wasn't particularly independently notable in the first place and didn't really need a separate article to start with. Perpetuating the unneeded split is ill advised. oknazevad (talk) 19:37, 8 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Additionally, that article on the former unit, in addition to being well out of date, reads like its part of the corporate website. Seriously, it fails NPOV in every way. oknazevad (talk) 19:39, 8 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Grammar and Punctuation

I would also suggest that the grammar and punctuation errors in the piece be corrected. It's embarrassing..... 14:01, 23 November 2015 (UTC)104.129.204.85 (talk)