Talk:Geology applications of Fourier transform infrared spectroscopy: Difference between revisions
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2) Explain a little about the unit of wavenumber, there is page in wikipedia. Readers may be curious why to use wavenumber instead of wavelength as normal In infra red spectrum. |
2) Explain a little about the unit of wavenumber, there is page in wikipedia. Readers may be curious why to use wavenumber instead of wavelength as normal In infra red spectrum. |
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3) Put a real photo of Fourier Transform Infrared Spectroscopy (FTIR) to attract readers. |
3) Put a real photo of Fourier Transform Infrared Spectroscopy (FTIR) to attract readers. |
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==Suggestion from Beth== |
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Hi Jennifer, your page is really good and informative but I think there are a few amendments you can make and things you could explain more clearly. |
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1) Some errors occur in the punctuation such as recurring double full stops where you have referenced, units and chemical formulas not subscript, units (ppm) missing in one example and reference (Ventura, 2011) maybe should be put as a a link reference. |
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2) Referencing diagrams is probably good if it is not your own work. |
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3) For the final section on 'linkage between arcritarchs and microfossil taxa' there is a sentence 'Aliphatic C-H stretching bands[...]' which I found very complicated. I think a chart of the results for the bands could help visualise this and give the reader a better understanding of what is meant by the common target functional groups. |
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4) In the fluid and melt inclusions section I think the examples in Italy are enough and I don't really know what you mean by the 'etc..' at the end. |
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Revision as of 04:19, 23 October 2016
Reviews from Vincent
1) For the application of geology,I think visualising results into the charts to readers will have a better understanding for the results of Fourier Transform Infrared Spectroscopy (FTIR). such as IR - spectrum of compound vibration , you can visualise those wavenumber into a diagram. 2) Explain a little about the unit of wavenumber, there is page in wikipedia. Readers may be curious why to use wavenumber instead of wavelength as normal In infra red spectrum. 3) Put a real photo of Fourier Transform Infrared Spectroscopy (FTIR) to attract readers.
Suggestion from Beth
Hi Jennifer, your page is really good and informative but I think there are a few amendments you can make and things you could explain more clearly. 1) Some errors occur in the punctuation such as recurring double full stops where you have referenced, units and chemical formulas not subscript, units (ppm) missing in one example and reference (Ventura, 2011) maybe should be put as a a link reference. 2) Referencing diagrams is probably good if it is not your own work. 3) For the final section on 'linkage between arcritarchs and microfossil taxa' there is a sentence 'Aliphatic C-H stretching bands[...]' which I found very complicated. I think a chart of the results for the bands could help visualise this and give the reader a better understanding of what is meant by the common target functional groups. 4) In the fluid and melt inclusions section I think the examples in Italy are enough and I don't really know what you mean by the 'etc..' at the end.