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Overall I thought this was a strong addition to the Asia Society article which I briefly reviewed. The contribution was neutral and your sources all checked out and seemed reliable. The main things I would mention would be you could potentially find a few highlights from the collection and illustrate them, or talk about attendance rates at the museum. These are two things I think might help round the section out. However as I said before, well done! [[User:Caroline.seabolt|Caroline.seabolt]] ([[User talk:Caroline.seabolt|talk]]) 22:06, 22 October 2016 (UTC)Caroline Seabolt |
Overall I thought this was a strong addition to the Asia Society article which I briefly reviewed. The contribution was neutral and your sources all checked out and seemed reliable. The main things I would mention would be you could potentially find a few highlights from the collection and illustrate them, or talk about attendance rates at the museum. These are two things I think might help round the section out. However as I said before, well done! [[User:Caroline.seabolt|Caroline.seabolt]] ([[User talk:Caroline.seabolt|talk]]) 22:06, 22 October 2016 (UTC)Caroline Seabolt |
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Hi Diana, you do a really great job giving an overview of the Asia Society. It would perhaps be beneficial to include what type of educational programming they do as well as maybe highlight any pieces or special exhibitions. I'm also curious if this was the original location for the society or if it moved at one point? |
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Revision as of 00:14, 18 November 2016
Peer Review
Overall I thought this was a strong addition to the Asia Society article which I briefly reviewed. The contribution was neutral and your sources all checked out and seemed reliable. The main things I would mention would be you could potentially find a few highlights from the collection and illustrate them, or talk about attendance rates at the museum. These are two things I think might help round the section out. However as I said before, well done! Caroline.seabolt (talk) 22:06, 22 October 2016 (UTC)Caroline Seabolt
Hi Diana, you do a really great job giving an overview of the Asia Society. It would perhaps be beneficial to include what type of educational programming they do as well as maybe highlight any pieces or special exhibitions. I'm also curious if this was the original location for the society or if it moved at one point?
- Denali