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I am unsure how to make it read less like a tour guide, I have received a lot of feedback through the tree house, and many people have helped me edit this page to make it acceptable. I had a look at the West Highland Way wikipedia page (a very similar walk), and I feel that this follows the safe structure and style of that page. Could you please provide me with more feedback so that I can edit this?[[User:EleanorLC|EleanorLC]] ([[User talk:EleanorLC|talk]]) 09:41, 28 June 2017 (UTC) |
I am unsure how to make it read less like a tour guide, I have received a lot of feedback through the tree house, and many people have helped me edit this page to make it acceptable. I had a look at the West Highland Way wikipedia page (a very similar walk), and I feel that this follows the safe structure and style of that page. Could you please provide me with more feedback so that I can edit this?[[User:EleanorLC|EleanorLC]] ([[User talk:EleanorLC|talk]]) 09:41, 28 June 2017 (UTC) |
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:''This leg of the route rated medium level difficulty'' and things like that, belong in a tour guide, not in Wikipedia. Regards, {{User:Shadowowl/Sig}} 14:47, 28 June 2017 (UTC) |
:''This leg of the route rated medium level difficulty'' and things like that, belong in a tour guide, not in Wikipedia. Regards, {{User:Shadowowl/Sig}} 14:47, 28 June 2017 (UTC) |
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:: I have removed the mention of difficult ratings, would this be sufficient to resubmit or are their other things I should change? [[User:EleanorLC|EleanorLC]] ([[User talk:EleanorLC|talk]]) 13:27, 29 June 2017 (UTC) |
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== 11:57:17, 28 June 2017 review of submission by Aamkaped == |
== 11:57:17, 28 June 2017 review of submission by Aamkaped == |
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{{Lafc|username=Aamkaped|ts=11:57:17, 28 June 2017|declined=Draft:Satya_Narayanan_R}} |
{{Lafc|username=Aamkaped|ts=11:57:17, 28 June 2017|declined=Draft:Satya_Narayanan_R}} |
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Revision as of 13:27, 29 June 2017
Constructive criticism is welcome.
09:41:48, 28 June 2017 review of submission by EleanorLC
I am unsure how to make it read less like a tour guide, I have received a lot of feedback through the tree house, and many people have helped me edit this page to make it acceptable. I had a look at the West Highland Way wikipedia page (a very similar walk), and I feel that this follows the safe structure and style of that page. Could you please provide me with more feedback so that I can edit this?EleanorLC (talk) 09:41, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
- This leg of the route rated medium level difficulty and things like that, belong in a tour guide, not in Wikipedia. Regards, » Shadowowl | talk 14:47, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
- I have removed the mention of difficult ratings, would this be sufficient to resubmit or are their other things I should change? EleanorLC (talk) 13:27, 29 June 2017 (UTC)
11:57:17, 28 June 2017 review of submission by Aamkaped
Have added links to newspapers and other third party sources, please do take a look
Aamkaped (talk) 11:57, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
- There are some citation errors, and please remove the L-Sep character at External Links (image) -- » Shadowowl | talk 14:52, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
Request on 10:04:16, 29 June 2017 for assistance on AfC submission by Coxnix
Hello Admin :) I would like to know more details about the declined AfC Darft:Sanjana Jon
cosnis 10:04, 29 June 2017 (UTC)