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Should the lead be rewritten to say she doesn't have SCID? She spends most of the book believing she does, but she doesn't. Ollieinc (talk) 07:37, 30 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It would be strange to lead off the description of the main character by mentioning an obscure disease that she doesn't have... maybe it could say that she "is being treated for" SCID? That would give the major information, that the disease is a gigantic factor in her life, and it wouldn't be inaccurate. Deltopia (talk) 16:17, 31 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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	Should the lead be rewritten to say she '''doesn't''' have SCID? She spends most of the book believing she does, but she doesn't. [[User:Ollieinc\|<span style="font-family:sans-serif;color:#438fff">'''Ollie'''inc</span>]] ([[User talk:Ollieinc\|<span style="font-family:sans-serif;color:#438fff;">talk</span>]]) 07:37, 30 May 2017 (UTC)		Should the lead be rewritten to say she '''doesn't''' have SCID? She spends most of the book believing she does, but she doesn't. [[User:Ollieinc\|<span style="font-family:sans-serif;color:#438fff">'''Ollie'''inc</span>]] ([[User talk:Ollieinc\|<span style="font-family:sans-serif;color:#438fff;">talk</span>]]) 07:37, 30 May 2017 (UTC)
			* It would be strange to lead off the description of the main character by mentioning an obscure disease that she doesn't have... maybe it could say that she "is being treated for" SCID? That would give the major information, that the disease is a gigantic factor in her life, and it wouldn't be inaccurate. [[User:Deltopia\|Deltopia]] ([[User talk:Deltopia\|talk]]) 16:17, 31 July 2017 (UTC)