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Any concerns please leave me a message at my talk page. [[User:RWardy|RWardy]] 20:09, 12 September 2007 (UTC) |
Any concerns please leave me a message at my talk page. [[User:RWardy|RWardy]] 20:09, 12 September 2007 (UTC) |
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== Refs, phrasing and opinion == |
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''"The movie is an attack against torture and it is understood that the crime in the title is committed by the Guardia Civil in torturing the suspects."'' |
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There's no ref for this (or almost anything in the article), and the wording is overly passive ("it is understood"). A better wording would be that "The title of the film plays on the idea that the real crime in Cuenca was the torture of the suspects committed by the Guardia Civil" or similar. I'd jump in and change it, but I have no source, so it would be my opinion. Does anyone have an external source for the original claim? -- [[User:PaulxSA|PaulxSA]] ([[User talk:PaulxSA|talk]]) 23:53, 23 September 2018 (UTC) |
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Refs, phrasing and opinion
"The movie is an attack against torture and it is understood that the crime in the title is committed by the Guardia Civil in torturing the suspects."
There's no ref for this (or almost anything in the article), and the wording is overly passive ("it is understood"). A better wording would be that "The title of the film plays on the idea that the real crime in Cuenca was the torture of the suspects committed by the Guardia Civil" or similar. I'd jump in and change it, but I have no source, so it would be my opinion. Does anyone have an external source for the original claim? -- PaulxSA (talk) 23:53, 23 September 2018 (UTC)