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Out of Date?

Surprised to see that this article doesn't even mention the keel laying for this boat:

http://news.usni.org/2015/05/18/navy-holds-keel-laying-ceremony-for-attack-sub-indiana — Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.158.48.16 (talk) 12:10, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Could use some editing

A tiny article to be sure, but better than a few weeks ago. However whoever wrote the first paragraph needs a lesson on how to write a paragraph - just about every sentence starts with she and follows the exact same structure - makes it sound like it was written by a sixth grader.

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 http://news.usni.org/2015/05/18/navy-holds-keel-laying-ceremony-for-attack-sub-indiana  <small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/192.158.48.16|192.158.48.16]] ([[User talk:192.158.48.16|talk]]) 12:10, 2 September 2015 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
+==Could use some editing==
+A tiny article to be sure, but better than a few weeks ago. However whoever wrote the first paragraph needs a lesson on how to write a paragraph - just about every sentence starts with she and follows the exact same structure - makes it sound like it was written by a sixth grader.