Talk:Earth's crustal evolution

Your work is fine with good outlines! Find some of my few comments and suggestions below.

1. I think your expressions are highly technical. You would consider making your expression a bit simpler for the general audience. 2. There are a lot of stand alone statements, which are to be supported with references but are not. 3. You did not link any of the technical words or terms with other Wikipedia page. e.g. crust, thermodynamics, minerals, Archaean, mantle, all the planets you mentioned. Some of these are existing on Wikipedia page so you should link them. 4. The texts in the second and third pictures are not legible. You should see to that. 5. Remember to edit the dates of about ten of the references. Some references are not well cited also. e.g. reference no. 16.BlessingAdeoti (talk) 12:51, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

own feedback

• realised after submission that i have not linked any keywords to their respective wiki pages, helping make the more complex areas more accessible to the average reader
• the final original figure has a resolution lower than the version uploaded which i also only appreciated after completion