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Which article are you evaluating?

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Islam

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I chose Islam as my topic for this tutorial because it is one of the largest religions and we should know what it is about. My preliminary impression of it is that there are photos, audio samples, and there is a precise introduction or an abstract that helps to summarize the whole paper.

Evaluate the article

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Lead Section:

The lead does include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic. Furthermore, it includes summaries for major sections. The lead does not include anything that is not in the article. The lead is concise as the topic "Islam" is a huge one.

Content:

The article's content is definitely related to the topic. The content is up-to-date. I do not think there are any contents missing or there are any content that do not belong in the article because of the size of the topic. The article does talk about the underrepresented groups within Islam.

Tone and Balance:

The article has a neutral and professional tone. No, there are no bias claims made in the article. I believe all the sections are underrepresented a little because of how grand the topic is. The minority or fringe viewpoints are described from the neutral point of view with accuracy. The article does not try to persuade the audience to one or other view, but opens neutral and stays and ends in neutral language, and tone.

Sources and References:

The article has many reliable secondary source and primary which is the Quran. The sources are thorough and numerous, also they reflect the availability literature on the topic. The sources are current. The sources are diverse in geography, race and years they were published in. The article includes marginalized Shia authors from the past. There are some peer-reviewed works that are published on Islam. The links work.

Organization and Writing Quality:

The article is very well written. It is concise, easy to read, and clear. There are no grammatical or spelling errors in the article. The article is broken down into different sections clearly.

Images and Media:

The article includes many images that assist the audience with understanding of the topic. The images are adequately captioned with moderation. I believe some of the images do not adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations. The images are on the right side, next to their respective sections, and look appealing.

Talk Page Discussion:

There are two portals which are Islamic and Religion portals, and there are conversations happening in them. The rating of the article can not be seen, but it is part of WikiProjects. The article includes many sources from different perspectives about Islam, also includes criticism of it.

Overall Impressions:

The article's overall status is up-to-date. The article's strength is diversification of sources, and many clear and concise sections. The article can improve in cutting down on sources because too many sources can damage the article as it might become confusing. I would say that the article is well-developed.