Talk:15-minute city

Hello! This is a stub that I'd like to add more detail to, including ongoing discussions of the concept during the COVID-19 pandemic, as well as Anne Hidalgo's plan in Paris. More information can be found on my user page. Jkolli (talk) 08:27, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

3/29 Edits and Organization

Hello! I'm glad to see that more people have taken an interest in this article since I first proposed edits. I reorganized the existing text into sections, removed uncited information, and added more information to sections from my sandbox. For my next steps, I plan to add more examples of implementations, specifically from Asia, and expand the implications and critiques section. I welcome any edits! Jkolli (talk) 07:34, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

→Great job on this article! I noticed how much you expanded the page with specific examples of models and city implementation studies, which I thought helped a lot in understanding the feasibility and reasoning behind different concepts behind the 15 minute city. Information is presented in a way that gives background and room for the reader to form an opinion. In terms of future edits, it would be great to see more links and images (specifically an image of what a 15 minute city plan may look like could be helpful in visualizing the design and accessibility). Additionally, you can edit the lead to provide more of a roadmap to your later sections. Also, revising your headings for the implementation and critique section to separate the two into their own sections would make your last two sections more clear in terms of the content being presented. Content-wise, an important thing to consider may be to draw connections or to contrast between the different city examples and models. It might be helpful to see a summary table of some of the similar or differing ideas for the models/ implementation plans. Heatherkong (talk) 01:13, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]