Talk:Ed Sullivan Theater/GA1
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Reviewer: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 08:39, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
This looks like another well-researched article on New York theatres by Epicgenius and so is likely to be close to Good Article status without much work. I will start my review soon. simongraham (talk) 08:39, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
Comments
[edit]This is a stable and well-written article. 90.8% of authorship is by Epicgenius. It is currently ranked B class.
- The article is of appropriate length, 5,719 words of readable prose, plus a referenced list of notable productions and an infobox.
- It is written in a summary style, consistent with relevant Manuals of Style.
- Citations seem to be thorough and extensive, with 285 listed.
- Please confirm that phish.net is reputable.
- That appears to have been the band's own website. Nevertheless, I have replaced it with a news article. Epicgenius (talk) 19:08, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
- Other references appear to be from reputable sources.
- Images have appropriate licensing and CC tags.
- Earwig's Copyvio Detector identifies a 17.4% chance of copyright violation with what looks like a blog and 11.5% with the theatre's website.
- The lead repeats that Stephen Colbert is there now. Is this necessary?
- I have reduced the repetition now. Epicgenius (talk) 19:08, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
- Should "teletape" be capitalised?
- It was a proper name, "Teletape Studios", which I have made clear now. Epicgenius (talk) 19:08, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
- "The office section to the east is six bays wide and 13 stories high, with the windows on each stories being grouped in pairs" I believe "stories" should be singular.
- I see no other obvious spelling or grammar errors.
@Epicgenius: Congratulations of another well-written piece of work. Please ping me when you would like me to take another look. simongraham (talk) 08:58, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
- @Simongraham: Thanks for the comments. I have now addressed all the comments you brought up. Epicgenius (talk) 19:08, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: Great work. I will complete the review now. simongraham (talk) 00:02, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
Assessment
[edit]The six good article criteria:
- It is reasonable well written.
- the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct;
- it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead, layout and word choice.
- the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct;
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- it contains a reference section, presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;
- all inline citations are from reliable sources;
- it contains no original research;
- it contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism;
- it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail.
- it contains a reference section, presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;
- It is broad in its coverage
- it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
- it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
- it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
- It has a neutral point of view.
- it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to different points of view.
- it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to different points of view.
- It is stable.
- it does not change significantly from day to day because of any ongoing edit war or content dispute.
- it does not change significantly from day to day because of any ongoing edit war or content dispute.
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- images are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content;
- images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
- images are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content;
Congratulations, Epicgenius. This article meets the criteria to be a Good Article.