Talk:CIVT-DT/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 16:56, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: ZKang123 (talk · contribs) 01:18, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

I will also review this.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:18, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

Images

All photos are under CC-BY or BY-SA licensed. The logo is in public domain.

Copyedits

• Earwig don't show any close paraphrasing issues.

Lead

• after the application of Baton Broadcasting for a television licence was granted from a field of five bids. – after Baton Brodcasting's application for a television licence was granted. Not sure how to incorporate "from a field of five bids". This sentence is already chunky and filled with details.
• young-skewing outlet – consider young-leaning outlet?

More comments to come.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:56, 18 July 2024 (UTC)