Talk:Administrative Professionals Day
The article assumes the reader is American
There is no reference made to which country this holiday applies to.
The following sentence should probably be reworked
"His goal was to encourage more women to become administrative assistants (called secretaries at the time). " It would be more natural to state what they were called at the time in the main body in the sentence and have todays title in the ()s. Also somewhere in the article there should probably list the job titles covered. Joncnunn 14:42, 26 April 2006 (UTC)
WHAT TITLES
EXACTLY WHAT JOB TITLES ARE APPRECIATED ON THIS DAY BESIDES SECRETARIES? NEEDS TO BE A LIST OF ALL JOB TITLES COVERED SOMEWHERE IN THE ARTICLE. 4.88.127.15 17:24, 26 April 2006 (UTC)JADIUSJMB@HOTMAIL.COM
First paragraph
Last two sentences of the first paragraph said basically the same thing. Removed the last sentence due to redundancy.