User talk:Needabreaklar

The article Golden Glory Food Industries has been speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under the criteria for speedy deletion, because the article seems to be blatant advertising which only promotes a company, product, group or service and which would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become an encyclopedia article. Please read the general criteria for speedy deletion, particularly item 11, as well as the guidelines on spam. Feel free to leave a note on my talk page if you have any questions about this. NawlinWiki 02:01, 27 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

How about rewriting it in a neutral tone, rather than with lines like "Believing that “The Best is Yet to Be”, the company strives to constantly improve its products and skills through collaboration with food technologists and its investment in R&D. Today, Golden Glory is well known for its creative twists to a traditional food format, its high quality and flexibility in producing and marketing Chinese sausages to its clients’ unique requirements." ? NawlinWiki 02:09, 27 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

That phrase best is yet to be is part of the company motto when it was featured on papers.

The article is not written from the point of view of a neutral observer, but from the point of view of a fan or promoter of the company. You didn't say "The company motto is..."; you asserted from the point of view of the author that the company believes that "the best is yet to be." That's not neutrality, and that's not how we do things. See WP:NPOV. If you can't write from a neutral perspective, you shouldn't be the one writing the article. NawlinWiki 02:15, 27 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Noted with thanks