User talk:Katesmithson/sandbox

In the sentence, "Although the company labels itself as being environmentally friendly, but BP a major cause of pollution, actually ranked within the top ten worst environmentally friendly corporations.” You should take out the “but“, because you used although in the beginning. "Although the company labels itself as being environmentally friendly, BP a major cause of pollution, actually ranked within the top ten worst environmentally friendly corporations.” Or take out the although. “BP labels itself as being environmentally friendly, but it’s actually a major cause of pollution, ranked within the top ten worst environmentally friendly corporations.” Keebee 17:32, 19 October 2007 (UTC)