Talk:Tropical Storm Erin (2007)/GA1

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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Shrewpelt (talk | contribs) at 18:09, 12 August 2008 (→‎GA Review: on hold). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

GA Review

I will be reviewing this article as soon as I can. Shrewpelt (talk) 17:46, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

My thoughts:

  • In the lead, you talk a little about how this tropical storm's name was retired, but do not mention it in the article's body. You will need to talk a little about that if you want that sentance to be in the lead.
  • "In Sisterdale, two people were killed when they were swept away stalled over Sister Creek[35]". You need a period in that sentence.
  • I noticed several redlinks; if articles are unlikely to be created for them, they probably should not be linked.
  • I find it very interesting that this storm redeveloped over land. Is there any information on why this happened?
  • "Nine water rescues occurred along the I-44 corridor, which was most impacted by Erin's rainfall.[49]" Mostly, perhaps?

I have put this article on hold. Good luck! Shrewpelt (talk) 18:09, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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