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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by JNG71886 (talk | contribs) at 01:03, 12 May 2010 (Jana Gana Mana). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

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Hello, SASSOTO, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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Jana Gana Mana

I really appreciate the work you did for this article.

Unfortunately the article has become very long and the primary focus on Jana Gana Mana as the National Anthem of India has become muddled in all the additions. In the coming weeks I want to rework/rewrite the article in a more clear manner.

I liked the translation you provided for the last 4 stanzas. Could you provide the citation for it and also the first stanza? I want to have all 5 stanza in a section titled Original 5 Stanzas of Jana Gana Mana (ore soemthing along those lines) and another section with just the National Anthem as provided by the national portal of the Gov't of India.

Also the discussion on controversies has become too long that it overshadows the rest of the article (about 1/2 of the article is on controversies). I can see that you put work into it to make a quality discussion but is there any way that you can provide a more concise version.

Thanks for your help! I should have a revision by next week for anyone to look over. If you would like to help me send me a message on my talk page JNG71886 (talk) 19:54, 8 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I did not delete your contribution. Please see the reply to your discussion topic. Best Regards! JNG71886 (talk) 01:03, 12 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]