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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by MrZebraThe13th (talk | contribs) at 18:16, 1 September 2010 (→‎Genevieve Thauvette: new section). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

I've made several revisions based on your valuable feedback, and I'm looking for any further feedback I should implement before submitting my final article. Thanks in advance!

Kristigaylord (talk) 01:28, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Joegbrown (talk) 01:33, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Joegbrown (talk) 01:42, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Is my article good?


Luminus9 (talk) 03:02, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I'd be very grateful if I could receive some feedback about this article. Thank you.


Tjcharles (talk) 04:51, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'm on the hunt to find more sources; but I want to make sure the language isn't biased and relevant. Thanks!

Jaad hast (talk) 05:35, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, i need advice on how to make sure this page is fully cited and credible. Aslo, i want to make sure this article is properly approved.

Pudtech (talk) 08:37, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This ia an article about a brand of Soy Milk sold in India. The article has been rewritten to fit to WIkipedia guidelines and standards. I would like feedback on the quality of the article and what should be my next steps. Sudeep88 (talk) 09:18, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Kindly Review this article & let me have your comments/suggestions to improve content. Thank you.


Drvaman JN (talk) 09:21, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Could anybody please give me feedback on this page? Many Thanks


Junction15 (talk) 10:24, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

IT infrastructure is becoming a critical component of a modern economy. A common understanding of what this is will facilitate discussion and help to influence its development. The absence of an entry in Wikipedia until this indicates a gap in the common perception of the underpinnings the knowledge economy. A gap that is increasingly being filled by cloud computing. This is unfortunate as the cloud, while part of the infrastructure, requires many other elements to operate. Clarifying these for the general public, and policy makers at all levels of government is essential if we are to provide adequate infrastructure for the knowledge economy.


68.151.112.221 (talk) 15:14, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I drafted this page for the band Now, Now Every Children, and I believe at this point it has enough reliable sources to be deemed notable, but I'm looking for more opinions here/feedback to help me get it right. Thanks in advance everyone.


Nexxia (talk) 15:47, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looking for some feedback on my first article. Any help, tips, tricks or edits would be appreciated.

Thanks!

HKMiller (talk) 17:54, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

MrZebraThe13th (talk) 18:16, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]