Talk:Elizabeth Shaw (confectionery company)
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When did the company leave this building? Where do they make products now? Sprintstar (talk) 07:22, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
This article reads as though it has been written by people promoting the company, and by the local residents around the chocolate factory. "Internationally known" is not quantifiable; "sold around the world" would be. The second paragraph talks about opinions of the residents, but provides no citations or quotations. The statement around George Ferguson is nebulous and vague; visions do not turn factories into "leading venues." Equally, "leading venue" is vague and not substantiated.