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When did the company leave this building? Where do they make products now? Sprintstar (talk) 07:22, 3 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

This article reads as though it has been written by people promoting the company, and by the local residents around the chocolate factory. "Internationally known" is not quantifiable; "sold around the world" would be. The second paragraph talks about opinions of the residents, but provides no citations or quotations. The statement around George Ferguson is nebulous and vague; visions do not turn factories into "leading venues." Equally, "leading venue" is vague and not substantiated.

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