Talk:Hurricane Uleki/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 05:09, 6 September 2014 (UTC)

• "also referred to as Typhoon Uleki" - I don't think you need the "to"
• "constituting as its secondary peak" - I don't think you need the "as"
• Could you add a ref in the note for Ulysses being the Hawaiian name for Uleki?
• Any reason you never mention that the system had an eye?
  • No mentions of it in the reports for some reason, only way to mention it would be OR through satellite imagery :/ Cyclonebiskit (talk) 12:37, 7 September 2014 (UTC)
• I'm confused. Did CPHC transfer warning to JTWC before it crossed the dateline? If so, at what latitude, and if not, why do you add the JMA bit as a distinct event? Wouldn't JMA also issue warnings at the same time as JTWC?
  • JTWC took over before it crossed the dateline, yes (which is before the JMA started up). Added the longitude where the JTWC took over. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 12:37, 7 September 2014 (UTC)
• Add a comma to the first sentence of the last MH paragrap
• Per DR, are you sure Uleki dissipated when it crossed the dateline? They only carry storms to the DL and then stop tracking them, so it might not have dissipated then.
  • The JMA will include one coordinate point east of the dateline if it crossed it; for Uleki, their last point is west of the dateline which means it dissipated. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 12:37, 7 September 2014 (UTC)

All in all a good article! Just take care of these and I'll be happy to pass. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 05:09, 6 September 2014 (UTC)

That should cover everything. Thanks for the review, Hink! Cyclonebiskit (talk) 12:37, 7 September 2014 (UTC)