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Reviewer: Tortle (talk · contribs) 05:28, 26 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]


The lead section needs to be more concise before I continue. Please leave a message and ping me here when the changes are made. Tortle (talk) 06:04, 26 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The length of the lead section is, in my opinion, justified in this case. Per WP:LEADLENGTH, an article of this size should generally have a lead section of two to three paragraphs. Although the current lead section has four paragraphs, since the fourth paragraph is not directly about the device itself, but rather about information about its successor, it can be excluded from the lead length requirements. In short, I do not think that changes have to be made. --sovereign°sentinel alt 07:27, 26 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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