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On Joe Thomas

I'm interested in the rationale behind your edits to Joe Thomas (actor) - as per WP:CENSOR I'm disputing them. ~ NottNott let's talk! contrib 15:47, 12 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@NottNott: My rationale was that because the source being quoted censors "fuck" to "f**k", the quote in the article should be kept faithful to the text of the source. It's not because the word fuck itself needs to be censored. RA0808 talkcontribs 19:13, 12 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I see - I did check the source next to the quote and it seems to be deadlinked. No problem. ~ NottNott let's talk! contrib 19:16, 12 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@NottNott: The link is working fine for me, try here. It was deadlinking for me at first but now it works fine. RA0808 talkcontribs 19:23, 12 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Shiva: September 2015

Hello, Thanks for letting me know. I would like for you to restore the changes that I made. I have done much research and was in the process of editing the page. I was not fully finished and was taking a break. I can explain my changes in the edit comments box once my changes are recovered.

Cheers! Adiyavar (talk) 04:06, 13 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Adiyavar: You can consult your changes here. Please do not remove material without intending to replace it, if you'd like to work on changes at your own pace consider creating a userspace draft. RA0808 talkcontribs 04:08, 13 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

CVS - Wikipedia

Hello,

I have taken out what I believe to be the promotional activity to which you described in your review.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/CVS_(Business_Rent_%26_Rates)

Is this better now?

Thanks,

Martin — Preceding unsigned comment added by Martin Tide (talkcontribs) 09:22, 14 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Martin Tide: There is an improvement, but several areas of the article still sound excessively promotional. The entire Background section still sounds like advert copy, I would recommend reading some of Wikipedia's policies on neutral point of view for information on how to improve the article. I have already gone in and made some improvements to phrasing etc. RA0808 talkcontribs 02:11, 15 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, many thanks for making those amends. I'm trying my best to meet the guidelines. All the information in the background is sourced with citations, however I do agree that this line is still slightly promotional: CVS has ensured that thousands of businesses are paying a fair level of business rates and have also secured the best possible terms on their rents.[3] However it is a fair description of what the business does. Do you feel it needs amending? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Martin Tide (talkcontribs) 09:48, 15 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Martin Tide: It definitely requires amending, there are more neutral ways of phrasing that. RA0808 talkcontribs 15:12, 15 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, the phrase is a factual element of the company's business, which is supported with a relevant citation. I have made further amends to it: "CVS helps businesses ensure that they are paying a fair level of business rates and also try and secure the best possible terms on their rents.[3]" Is this more suitable? Thanks for your help, Martin. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Martin Tide (talkcontribs) 09:12, 16 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, thanks for helping and making further amends to the page. Will the message at the top now be removed? Many thanks, Martin — Preceding unsigned comment added by Martin Tide (talkcontribs) 08:21, 17 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

MY WORLD TOUR

Stop editing my world tour if u don't believe me , google it Wowurebeautiful (talk) 19:12, 15 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The onus is on you to provide proof of changes, not me. RA0808 talkcontribs 19:16, 15 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Ww.

http://www.statisticbrain.com/justin-bieber-statistics/ Wowurebeautiful (talk) 19:25, 15 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

See, now was that so hard? RA0808 talkcontribs 19:26, 15 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Urban Meyer

I did not realize that I was vandalizing the page, I just knew that Meyer was friends with Tbiw and the announcers on Golf Channel said that he lived in Muirfield Village. I am new to Wikipedia and I am sorry I messed up. Caleb David Smith (talk) 19:16, 17 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Ban from editing.

Can you ban me from editing? Do you work for Wikipedia? Caleb David Smith (talk) 19:18, 17 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Tim Tebow on Urban Meyer

Did you delete Tebow out because he is a Christian and you are an atheist? Caleb David Smith (talk) 19:20, 17 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]