User:Ahouston5

This user is a student editor in Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/University_of_Nebraska-Lincoln/English_254_Writing_and_Communities_(Fall_2015).
Student assignments should always be carried out using a course page set up by the instructor. It is usually best to develop assignments in your sandbox. After evaluation, the additions may go on to become a Wikipedia article or be published in an existing article.

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Hi! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Thepunalsorises/sandbox

I'm going to make suggestions on here so you can adapt them as you choose.

The Marching Scarlet Knights (also known as The Pride of New Jersey) is the marching band of Rutgers University. Students of all academic majors make up the band. Under the direction of Professor Timothy Smith, the Pride of New Jersey rehearses three days each week during the marching season and performs at all home Rutgers Scarlet Knights football games. The band also travels to select regular season and post season football games.

I would move the second sentence ("Students of all academic...") further down in the paragraph. It seems like there should be more important information that could come after the initial sentence. Maybe something about how long the band has been around? I mostly think your lead should be longer. If this is how short the intro is, I'm worried about how much content you'll have for the rest of the page. I would mention the history (such as the date of founding), which you could turn into its own section later on in the article. Maybe add the location of Rutgers in the first sentence or mention it shortly after.