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All looks good so far. I'd recommend cutting down on the number of links to the same page (the encyclopedia article) and perhaps diversifying your sources. In other words, try to find multiple different descriptions of this story and synthesize those, rather than writing your summary based on one. You of course mention that the Myrmidons are important to the Iliad; would it be relevant to describe their character, as a soldiering people, in the iliad? Has any research/writing/analysis been done to this end? Other than that, I'd say good job on digging up this many places where the myrmidons appear in literature, culture, reference books, etc. Just keep researching and expanding, and I think you're on the right track.