Wikipedia:WikiProject Medicine/Osmosis

We are working with Osmosis to create medical videos under a CC BY SA license. As part of the process of creation of these videos Osmosis is interested in our feedback on the scripts. They will be posted here with X days given for review.

Pending videos scripts

Please focus on finding major omissions or scientific inaccuracies in the content. Refrain from commenting on narration style. We will leave each script open for feedback for 2 weeks before sending it to production. Thanks!

Title	Must be reviewed by	Link to script
Aneurysms and Aortic dissection	2016-01-12	https://docs.google.com/a/slinn.ca/document/d/1ml1NzOIJ_vPBwB4gBrzm5LgpmdYw3LH62YUxDKDUhIY/edit?usp=sharing
Arteriosclerosis, Arteriolosclerosis, & Atherosclerosis	2016-01-12	https://docs.google.com/a/slinn.ca/document/d/1x03rlngtN5haQ9bNOyMqt8vX08v-4hlU02k1V4_yHOw/edit?usp=sharing
Ischemia	2016-01-12	https://docs.google.com/document/d/16-AYpLukxvGF6h6V9KUrnCctk0w626gv2G2ENQLVZpY/edit?usp=sharing
Hypoxia	2016-01-12	https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k1GOJsfqHVEtNR5MOukCkQ4f8Mio8HAjJJ0fIcPgeWo/edit?usp=sharing
Vasculitis	2016-01-19	https://docs.google.com/document/d/19cH6WsLErzoARr9jG_QrIwsFeduafKFZmwbsl2T860c/edit?usp=sharing
Hypertension	2016-01-19	https://docs.google.com/document/d/14RPlbLTJL3UbBTEDFl_-ZuGklJhNTzjJ8NzuDsvycg4/edit?usp=sharing