Draft:ZMR

Submission declined on 8 February 2016 by LaMona (talk).

There is still quite a bit that isn't sourced, and therefore needs to be removed. In addition, looking at references #3-4, there are criticisms of the game that are not included in the article. Since the article does not include actual information from the reviews, it violates neutral point of view and is therefore no more than an advertisement for the game -- which is not allowed.

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This draft has not been edited in over six months and qualifies to be deleted per CSD G13.

Declined by LaMona 8 years ago. Last edited by Baraqorn 8 years ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Submission declined on 28 January 2016 by Anarchyte (talk).

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Declined by Anarchyte 8 years ago.

Comment: Most of the references are not reliable sources, per the video game article guidelines. Gamepedia is a user-run wiki, similar to Wikipedia. Anar c hyte 05:53, 28 January 2016 (UTC)

REDIRECT En Masse Entertainment#ZMR